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Upon Leaving

- Peter - Wednesday, April 10th, 2002 : goo

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"...Move to Brooklyn and you'll practically live on the train..." but I pack my life into boxes, neatly, and the shade flaps as a breeze leaks over my beaded brow, evaporating the sweat of this painful time of growth.

Shouldering my load, I trod the cobbles, purging my empathies in measured breaths. A wailing siren, a diesel grunt sings out; a sorrowful sigh amidst a punchy, nauseating anguish, and I hesitate too long before raising my hand to block the noise from my ringing ear.

Who can silence the voice of the city? Its tongues call to me in veiled timbres, preaching the blackness of the pavement, harbingers of a melting sun they are, gilding rhymes from the click-clack of the passing subway train.

I enter the station, a shower of blue-white sparks arcing over my head as the noon sun half-cascades onto me, its heat irradiating, hot solar fire.

"That which burns the body ignites the soul."

With another step, I'm south-bound, and the clouds slip away, bringing shady solace to someone. Anyone. Anyone but me.

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Peter: 2nd Mar 2004 - 20:36 GMT

i remember writing this; seems like a lifetime ago.

Peter: 21st Jun 2005 - 17:57 GMT

two lifetimes ago, even. i now live in brooklyn again...

Peter: i think were up to three lifetimes ago by now.

Cartlegger: 13th Nov 2008 - 02:07 GMT

Damn, six long years ago....and ya still live in Brooklyn! And well, you do "practically live on the train", no?

Peter: 13th Nov 2008 - 02:55 GMT

this is actually from the first time i moved out of brooklyn!

it was back and forth with manhattan for a while, but it looks like brooklyn has stuck this time. guess the third time was the charm. i live exactly where i need to live right now.

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